Thursday 15 September 2016

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We are explain we don't need to take drugs.


Narrative Writing

Have you guys ever been Camping for a week?


On  A sunny day we went camping for my Mother's Day.
While we were in our heating car we were looking for a good place to camp.


When we had found a camping spot for us to camp.
It was getting dark so we made fire. We had dinner and went and set our tents up.

The next day we decided to go for a bush walk.
We got a bit lost. We went through a straight walkway
But when we were trying to find our way back to the campsite we were going through zig zag
Walkways. I thought it was weird so I told dad “ We had gone through straight walkways.”

He said “ I think we went through the wrong path.”


My little brother saw a tent but he thought someone else lived there. He said ask them if they know where to go to get to vanau. But we were calling out and my brother said “ It looks exactly like our camp site.”


I said to him “ It is our campsite then we had packed all our gears and driven home.


WALT: write a narrative by looking at a picture and writing our own story.



Thursday 8 September 2016

Hiwi The Kiwi Speech marks

Have you guys ever been fishing? I haven’t it is my first time I'm a bit frightened.  Well my family decided to go fishing on a Saturday afternoon I was trying to deny going but I would of been a spoiler so I went.


On our way to Mission Bay beach I was thinking what would it be like fishing. Like would the fish jump on the boat and bite,  a shark bump the boat and we all fall? I had no idea what it was going to be like. When I was going on to the boat it was wiggling because of the waves and I thought it was a fish so I jumped back onto surf.
I got on the boat at we went out of shore and we caught quite a lot of fish. My dad had got a really big fish. He said, “This is what we call fishing.”


I had remembered that Hiwi the kiwi came to Pt england school and said, “If you get a big fish it could have a baby,” he said. “That could be true so he safely put it back in the ocean.”


I also said to him “ Wash it in Sea Water.”


He said “ how do you know all of these stuff you have never been fishing.”


I said Hiwi the Kiwi came to our school.”


He said“ they have taught you right.”  

Muscle Fatigue

I will be telling you how to beat muscle fatigue and the cause of muscle fatigue I hope you learn about this.




Wednesday 7 September 2016

Hiwi The Kiwi

Have you guys ever been fishing? I haven’t it is my first time i'm a bit frightened.  Well my family decided to go fishing on a saturday afternoon I was trying to deny going but I would of been a spoiler so I went.

On our way to Mission bay beach I was thinking what wouuld it be like fishing.like would the fish jump on the boat and bite,  a shark bump the boat and we all fall I had no idea what it was going to be like. When I was going on to the boat it was wiggling because of the waves and I thought it was a fish so I jumped back onto surf.

I got on the boat at we went out of shore and we caught quite a lot of fish. My dad had got a really big fish. He said “ this is what we call fishing”. I had remembered that Hiwi the kiwi came to Pt england school and said “ if you get a big fish it could have a baby” he said “ that could be true so he safely put it back in the ocean”. I also said to him “ Wash it in Sea Water”. He said “ how do you know all of these stuff you have never been fishing” I said Hiwi the Kiwi came to our school” He said “ they have taught you right.