Thursday, 31 March 2016

Hooked our audience Camp

The Hook I am going to use is Question. Did you know that Pt England school have had 26 years of year 5/6 camp?


On week 8 2016 in march we had a year 5/6 camp at Pt England school. My favourite day/activity was the concert because we all got to watch each other perform and see what all the groups were practising to show friends and family. 


WALT: Hook our audience and make them Interested in our work
   


Thursday, 17 March 2016

Volcano Narrative Hook

Did you know the ring of fire has 452 volcanoes , and 75% of the earth's active and dormant volcanoes.
One of those volcanoes is a lady and another one is an man! Did you know 2 of those volcanoes live in Australia? Because me and my friends  saw 2 of the volcanoes in the fun park when we went to Australia!

WALT: Make our own story and Hook my Readers to be Intrested into reading my story.

Hook your Audience



WALT: Tell our Audience what we have been learning about and make them Interested in reading our story.

Thursday, 10 March 2016

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Happy New Year

Jack Jack Attack


The babysitter went to report that Jack Jack had something wrong with the baby
and the man thought she was crazy so he head shot her. The baby was hiding doing stuff that normal baby's don't do.

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Mikes new car



Mike had bought a new car that was a six wheels and he was surprising James and then James said" What Was Wrong with your own car. When James said that Mike said because it is a 6 wheel car and then Mike said get in the car James said" It Is Too Small". Mike said"It Is Ajastable". h\so he was playing with buttons. They were trying to put their seatbelts on but Mike couldn't get it on so he flew out of the car door.