Monday, 16 June 2014

My favourite sister

Do you have a kind and loving sister? My sister Mary is and Mary is 11 years old. Her favorite food is burger king.  me and Mary like to play together. She is very smart at reading and writing Mary went up a year. I think she is very pretty too. I know that her favorite show that she likes to watch is Shortland street. Mary just likes to do anything as long as Mary is happy.  

      

2 comments:

  1. Hi Stacey,
    That is very kind and generous of you. The thing that you need to work on is just where to put your Capital Letters. Otherwise that was a great story. Thank you. I am looking forward to read more things on your blog.

    From Mary Class 4,

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  2. Hi Stacey,
    I thought you wrote really nice things about your big sister Mary. You are very beautiful like your sister too.

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