Friday, 10 June 2016

Will She Save her?

Will Wonder woman save her? Read my story if you want to find out!


Have you ever seen someone in such danger?

There was a woman working at her shop and she was serving her customers. One of her customers was the mayor and he had the most powerful diamond in his pocket. Because he was going to take it to the museum and on the way he wanted to stop in the shop. The Joker had appeared and was threatening the Mayor and the shopkeeper trying to get the diamond of the Mayor. But the mayor didn't give it so the Joker took the shopkeeper all the way up on the sky tower the shopkeeper was scared. Her fear was hights but the Joker didn't care cause he just wanted the diamond.



The Joker had yelled “GIVE ME THE DIAMOND OR I’LL DROP HER DOWN”.
The Mayor was gonna give it but wonder woman appeared and secretly whispered to the Mayor don't give it.
So the mayor listened and didn't give it but the Joker dropped her and Wonder woman zoomed up and catches her and took her back to her shop carefully and went back up and defeated the Joker



1 comment:

  1. Stacey, I really like that you spent some time considering your hook. Now we just need to keep working on showing our story to our readers instead of telling it.

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