Lerning to swim is important

Introduction:

Do you know how to swim? Learning to swim is important.There are lots of ways you can swim. i could tell you three of them to you.

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one of the reasons why is it important learning how to swim is because NEW Zealand has one of the highest drowning rates in the world.Twenty five percent of children aged O-10 do not know how to swim.  

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New Zealand is a small country that is surrounded of water.

In summer you can go for a swim and if you get washed away far you can swim back. If you do not know how to swim you can go to your local pools   

Conclusion:   Learning how to swim is important if you drown your moves you done with the instroucter.